Hey everybody! I am Aylinerik and i made an inking page so your art is clearer. Inking is done after detailed sketching where with a marker you go over the sketch and make clear lines. Remember that you only have one try while inking, so be careful on not to ink the wrong things!
So first, find a black pen with a very thin tip (something like 0.2).
Then, go over your sketch with defined lines. Don't go over sketches with inking if you are doing it like your sketching.
Now erase the sketch with a good eraser and only leave the ink on.
There you go! Now you may color it... But colors are sometimes too hard... Check out this page page for some more info on colored shading!